See the difference: 5-paragraph vs “show and tell”

In my last post, I talked about how to ditch the 5-paragraph essay by switching to the “show and tell” approach. For you visual learners, I put together a simple outline of each so you can see the difference. Read more about how to Show and Tell to write a...

Forget the 5-paragraph Essay

  It’s time to let go of the 5-paragraph essay format that most English teachers have pounded into your DNA by now. College admissions essays are very different from the formal academic essays you wrote in high school. How? Well, most are called...

what do you skip?

“Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.” From author Elmore Leonard’s 10 Rules for Writing. What do you skip when you read? The long paragraphs that go on and on and lose your interest, right? So when you read back your own essay, and...

How to Write an Anecdote

College Application Essays How to Tell a Story In journalism, writers often use “anecdotal leads,” that is, starting a news or feature story with a mini-story about a real-life event, one that puts the reader in the middle of the action. Usually, the anecdote only...

Who Should You Show Your Essay?

  Students often want feedback on their college admissions essays, but are not sure where to turn. Here’s my advice: 1.Be very selective who you show it to. Remember, writing is subjective: one person might love your essay and another might hate it. Parents can...

Good Topics: See for yourself!

Today, I’m going to try to practice what I preach (in this blog) and Show instead of Tell you the difference between good topics and bad topics: BAD The Time I Climbed Mount Everest My Mission Trip to Costa Rica The Day We Won the State Championship Why I Hate Writing...

Three great books on how to write college application essays

I have mentioned these titles before, but these are my three favorites:   There are a jillion of these how-to books on the market, and all have helpful things to say. However, the advice in these books is spot-on, and they include helpful sample essays and are...